英語(yǔ)作文參考范文及點(diǎn)評(píng)
英語(yǔ)六級(jí)寫(xiě)作真題及范文： 能力和外表 Abilities and Good Looks
英語(yǔ)六級(jí)寫(xiě)作范文題目是“不要以貌取人It is unwise to put all eggs in one basket. It is unwise to judge a person by appearance.”，下面范文中的素材可用在本次的考試中。
英語(yǔ)六級(jí)作文參考范文：
Abilities and Good Looks
能力和外表
We are often told not to judge people by their appearance, because for a person, abilities are far more important than appearance. Throughout history, there are numerous examples of outstanding people with remarkable achievements who are just plain or not good-looking at all.
我們經(jīng)常被告誡不要通過(guò)自己的外表來(lái)判斷人，因?yàn)閷?duì)于一個(gè)人，能力比容貌更重要。在歷史上，有許多杰出的人都有杰出的成就，他們只是純素或不好看。
However, nowadays some people hold the belief that appearance outweighs abilities, partly because some beautiful people seem to have advantages in competitive situations like job interviews and have been given more opportunities than others.
然而，現(xiàn)在有些人認(rèn)為外表比能力，部分原因是由于一些漂亮的人似乎都在像面試競(jìng)爭(zhēng)情況下的優(yōu)勢(shì)，得到了比別人更多的機(jī)會(huì)。
Nevertheless, I still firmly believe that abilities are more important. For one thing, although good looks are easy on the eye, it is always one's abilities that create values that really matter. For another, while people's good looks were born to them, abilities have to be gained through deliberate self-cultivation and years of hardworking which speak more of people's true colors. Last but not least, abilities grow over time while good looks only fade. Eventually, it is the abilities that help people succeed, so it is safe to say that abilities will always bring more to life than good looks.盡管如此，我還是堅(jiān)信能力更重要。對(duì)于一件事，雖然好的外表很容易，但它始終是一個(gè)人的能力，創(chuàng)造價(jià)值，真正的問(wèn)題。另一方面，人們對(duì)他們的良好外表，能力必須通過(guò)深思熟慮的修養(yǎng)和多年的努力，這講更多的人的真實(shí)面目。最后但并非最不重要的是，隨著時(shí)間的推移，隨著時(shí)間的推移，能力會(huì)隨著時(shí)間的推移而增長(zhǎng)，而良好。最終，它是幫助人們成功的能力，所以說(shuō)，能力將永遠(yuǎn)帶來(lái)更多的生活比良好的外觀。
明天會(huì)更好 Tomorrow Will be Better
There is a song named Tomorrow Will be Better. I like to hear it so much. Every time when I listen to it, I can feel the hope. Even though I don’t feel happy, I will be positive to life. We will meet all kinds of difficulties,but if we can hold on and keep move on, all the hard time will pass, the bright future will come sooner or later.
有一首歌叫《明天會(huì)更好》。我很喜歡聽(tīng)這首歌。每次當(dāng)我聽(tīng)到這首歌的時(shí)候，我能感受到希望。即使我不開(kāi)心，但是也會(huì)樂(lè)觀對(duì)待生活。我們會(huì)遇到各種各樣的困難，但是如果我們能挺住并向前進(jìn)，所有的艱難時(shí)刻都終將會(huì)過(guò)去，美好的明天遲早會(huì)來(lái)到。
工作對(duì)生活的重要性 Work Is Important in Our Life
These days I have beenleisure but bored after finishing the final exam. In fact, I really don’t likethe way I have lived in these days, because I feel like a foolish that can'tfind my values and have to be supported by others. That made me crazy.Therefore, I consider that people should find and achieve their values in lives,especially female. Obviously, work is an important way to achieve our values.However, why is work important in our life?
期末考試過(guò)后的這幾天我很閑但是也很無(wú)聊。事實(shí)上，我真的不喜歡這幾天的這種生活方式，因?yàn)槲腋杏X(jué)像個(gè)傻子一樣找不到我的價(jià)值而要靠別人養(yǎng)活。這使我瘋掉了。所以，我認(rèn)為人應(yīng)該找到并實(shí)現(xiàn)自己的生活價(jià)值，特別是女性。很明顯，工作是 實(shí)現(xiàn)我們價(jià)值的重要方式。但是，為什么工作在我們的生活中如此重要呢？
Firstly, work isthe only way for us to satisfy our basic needs. In order to get food, clothesand other living conditions to live happily, we have to work hard. In thisaspect, work is a natural responsibility for us, for our families. But usually,those who just consider work as a kind of responsibility regard work as a heavyburden in their life and they will feel really tired after a period of time,even some of which will choose to renounce the responsibility they have.Therefore, workmust have other positive meanings in deeper respect.
首先，工作是我們滿(mǎn)足基本需要的唯一方式。為了獲取食物，衣服還有其他生存條件以幸福生活，我們必須努力工作。在這方面，工作對(duì)我們以及對(duì)家人來(lái)說(shuō)是自然的`責(zé)任。但是，通常那些只把工作當(dāng)做一種責(zé)任的人，也把工作當(dāng)做是生活中的一種壓力。經(jīng)過(guò)一段時(shí)間后他們就會(huì)覺(jué)得很累，甚至有的人會(huì)選擇放棄他們的責(zé)任。因此，工作必須有在更深層面有積極的意義。
In addition, I strongly feel inthese days that work is an important way to achieve ourselves. Just as Maslowsays that human has five needs: physiological needs, safety needs, love andbelonging, esteem, self-actualization and self-transcendence. In my opinion,work is relative to the higher hierarchy of needs. We always need to achieveour value and worth to gain esteem or recognition from others by some ways,especially by work. I think it is easyto appear in the younger those who have some mature thoughts, so that mostteenagers will try their best to get rid of their parents’ care to make a livingby themselves. In this aspect, working is not only a way to make a living, butalso a way for us to achieve ourselves. In other words, working can bring satisfactionto us in spiritual.
另外，這幾天我有強(qiáng)烈的感覺(jué)，工作是實(shí)現(xiàn)自我的重要方式。正如馬斯洛所說(shuō)，人有五大需求：生理需求，安全需求，愛(ài)與歸屬，自尊，自我實(shí)現(xiàn)和自我超越。在我看來(lái)，工作與更高層次的需求有關(guān)。我們總是需要實(shí)現(xiàn)我們的價(jià)值，想要通過(guò)某些方法，尤其是通過(guò)工作，從別人那里獲得自尊或認(rèn)可。我認(rèn)為這對(duì)有成熟想法的年輕人來(lái)說(shuō)是很容易的，所以大部分的青年會(huì)盡量擺脫父母的照顧獨(dú)自謀生。從這一方面來(lái)看，工作不僅是謀生手段，也是我們實(shí)現(xiàn)自我的手段。換句話(huà)說(shuō)，工作能夠給我們帶來(lái)精神上的滿(mǎn)足。
In a word, work isimportant in our life. No matter what kind of occupation we pursue, we shouldtry our best. As an adult, without work, you would be bored, and even decadent.
總之，工作在生活中很重要。不管我們追求的是哪一種職業(yè)，我們應(yīng)該盡我們最大的努力。作為一個(gè)成年人，沒(méi)有工作你就會(huì)覺(jué)得無(wú)聊，甚至頹廢。
The Real-name Train Ticket Purchase System Launched 火車(chē)票購(gòu)買(mǎi)實(shí)名制實(shí)施
【精彩范文】
The Real-name Train Ticket Purchase System Launched
With the largest population in the world and an underdeveloped railway system, China is notorious for making train tickets particularly hard to purchase for ordinary citizens, especially during the Spring Festival when the railway is the primary means of transportation. As a result, ticket scalpers have proliferated, monopolizing a large quantity of tickets by either hiring people to buy tickets or conspiring with the ticket sellers within the railway stations.
As the entire nation’s outrage over ticket scarcity keeps mounting, the Chinese government has introduced the drastic measure that citizens purchase train tickets with valid personal IDs. The system is designed primarily to crack down on ticket scalpers whose business has developed into a major industry. By allowing each inpidual to buy only one ticket, the system seeks to make tickets accessible to people in real need, rather than controlled by a small number of profit-seeking and illegal scalpers.
However, this reformatory measure, while somewhat easing ticket scarcity, creates new problems. Buyers find the whole buying process troublesome and time-consuming. When boarding the train, the passenger who forgets to bring his valid ID certificate will be denied access to the train. I believe the introduction of each new system is coupled with shortcomings and there must be ways to improve the system as it is enforced. Of course, we look forward to the day when China’s railway networks are so sufficiently developed that tickets are readily available to anyone at any time.
【參考譯文】
由于擁有世界上最眾多的人口，但鐵路系統(tǒng)欠發(fā)達(dá)，中國(guó)多年來(lái)一直臭名昭著，極難讓普通民眾順利的買(mǎi)到車(chē)票； 尤其是在春節(jié)期間，火車(chē)作為人們主要的交通手段，一票難求。這樣一來(lái)，票販子們層出不窮，壟斷了很大一部分票源。其做法有二：一是雇人購(gòu)票，二是與火車(chē)站內(nèi)的售票員狼狽為奸。
隨著全體國(guó)民對(duì)購(gòu)票難的憤慨之情日趨高漲，中國(guó)政府已引入了一項(xiàng)重大的舉措，即公民憑有效個(gè)人身份證件購(gòu)票。該制度主要旨在打擊倒賣(mài)車(chē)票的黃牛黨，其販票生意幾已形成一個(gè)龐大的產(chǎn)業(yè)。由于只允許每個(gè)人購(gòu)買(mǎi)一張車(chē)票，購(gòu)票實(shí)名制盡量要使車(chē)票到達(dá)真正有需求的人的手中，而不是被控制在一小撮違法亂紀(jì)、唯利是圖的黃牛黨手中。
然而，這一改革性舉措，對(duì)票源緊缺雖有所緩解，也帶來(lái)了某些新問(wèn)題。購(gòu)票者們發(fā)現(xiàn)，整個(gè)購(gòu)票過(guò)程甚為繁瑣，十分耗時(shí)。此外，持票登車(chē)時(shí)，忘帶有效身份證件的旅客將被禁止上車(chē)。我相信，每個(gè)新體制的引入，都會(huì)伴隨著這樣那樣的弊端。隨著這一體制的不斷實(shí)施，必將有方法將這一體制予以完善。當(dāng)然，我們期盼著有朝一日，中國(guó)的鐵路網(wǎng)變得如此之發(fā)達(dá)，以至于火車(chē)票對(duì)于任何人，無(wú)論在任何時(shí)候，都能得來(lái)不費(fèi)吹灰之力。
【值得熟記的句式與短語(yǔ)】
1. an underdeveloped railway system欠發(fā)達(dá)的鐵路系統(tǒng)
2. primary means of transportation主要的交通手段
3. ticket scalper票販子，黃牛
4. conspire with與……勾結(jié)
5. drastic measure重大的舉措
6. crack down on ticket scalpers打擊倒賣(mài)車(chē)票的黃牛黨
7. develop into a major industry形成一個(gè)龐大的產(chǎn)業(yè)
8. reformatory measure改革性舉措
9. ease ticket scarcity緩解票源緊缺
10. troublesome and time-consuming繁瑣、耗時(shí)
11. be denied access to the train被禁止上車(chē)
12. be coupled with與……結(jié)合，與……連接，與……配合
What Is Success? 什么是成功？
What is success? Different people hold differentviews on This question. Some think that one is successful if he can make a great deal of money. Others argue that success means holding an important government post. Still others believe that whoever has got high academic title is successful. It is clear that there are quite different opinions on success.
什么是成功？不同的人對(duì)此問(wèn)題有不同的看法。有些人認(rèn)為，如果一個(gè)人能掙許多的錢(qián)，他就是成功者。另一些人則爭(zhēng)辯說(shuō)，成功意味著高居政府要職。還有些人則認(rèn)為，誰(shuí)有高級(jí)職稱(chēng)，誰(shuí)就是成功者。可見(jiàn)，對(duì)成功有截然不同的看法。
In order to become successful, you should first of all be both perseverance and hardworking. As you know, whatever you do, there are always two possible results: success and failure. When you fail, you should never lose heart. On the contrary, you must build up your confidence and work even harder. You should always keep in mind that perseverance is the mother of success and industry is the key to it. In addition, you should pay great attention to your work method. It is necessary for you to sum up your experience constantly and improve the efficiency of your work. Finally, it is important for you to get along well with your co-workers, care for each other and help each other. If you follow these principles, you will certainly achieve remarkable success in the future.
要成為成功者，首先，你必須有毅力并且勤奮。正如你所知道的，不管你做什么事，總有兩種可能的結(jié)果：成功或失敗。當(dāng)你失敗時(shí)，你不應(yīng)喪失信心。相反，你應(yīng)該增強(qiáng)信心，并加倍努力。你應(yīng)始終牢記，毅力是成功之母，勤奮則是成功的關(guān)鍵。此外，你應(yīng)多注意工作方法。你應(yīng)不斷總結(jié)經(jīng)驗(yàn)，提高工作效率。最后，你應(yīng)該和你的同事友好相處，互相幫助，互相關(guān)心。如果你遵循這些原則，你將來(lái)一定能取得成功。
In my opinion, success means achieving brilliant results in one's work, that is, making outstanding contributions to the development of the country and bringing happiness to the people. So my conclusion is that even if one has made great progress in what he does, I don’t think there’s any reasons for him to be conceited.
我認(rèn)為，成功就是在一個(gè)人的工作中取得成就，也就是說(shuō)，為國(guó)家的發(fā)展做出卓越貢獻(xiàn)、給人們帶來(lái)幸福。因此，我的結(jié)論是，即使你在工作中取得了巨大的進(jìn)步，你也沒(méi)有任何理由妄自尊大。
【words】
post n. 崗位；郵件；標(biāo)桿
e.g. I wish you every success at your new post.
academic adj. 學(xué)術(shù)的；理論的；學(xué)院的
e.g. They can set up new academic disciplines.
perseverant n. 堅(jiān)持不懈；不屈不撓
e.g. Perseverance is the only road to success.
contrary adj. 相反的；對(duì)立的
e.g. Contrary, the woman more careful than many male.
industry n. 產(chǎn)業(yè)；工業(yè)；勤勉
e.g. I hope he will work with industry.
conceited adj. 自負(fù)的；狂想的；逞能的
e.g. How can you tolerate that conceited girl?
高考英語(yǔ)開(kāi)放式作文點(diǎn)評(píng)和習(xí)作修改
第二節(jié) 開(kāi)放作文 （15分）
請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面提示，寫(xiě)一篇短文。詞數(shù)不少于50。
In an English speech competition, you are asked to describe the following picture and explain to the judges how you understand it.
(請(qǐng)務(wù)必將情景作文寫(xiě)在答題卡II第二頁(yè)指定區(qū)域內(nèi))
寫(xiě)作文有兩個(gè)基本標(biāo)準(zhǔn)：一要切題，二要有文采。
這篇文章的題目要求有兩個(gè)：（上面紅字部分）
1. describe the following picture 描述圖畫(huà)內(nèi)容
2. explain to the judges how you understand it 對(duì)這幅畫(huà)的理解
所以，這篇文章基本可以分成兩段。第一段用來(lái)描述圖畫(huà)內(nèi)容。第二段用來(lái)寫(xiě)這幅圖畫(huà)說(shuō)明了什么問(wèn)題。第三段總結(jié)問(wèn)題。
1．描述圖畫(huà)：
圓規(guī)（compass，今年很多同學(xué)都寫(xiě)不出這個(gè)單詞，我查了一下這是個(gè)超綱詞，在《高中英語(yǔ)課程標(biāo)準(zhǔn)（詞匯表3500）》和《北京市高考英語(yǔ)考試說(shuō)明》中都沒(méi)有出現(xiàn)，顯然是出題人的疏忽造成的，起碼應(yīng)該在試卷上提供compass這個(gè)單詞。）畫(huà)圓形很輕松，鉛筆跑得滿(mǎn)頭大汗。兩者形成了鮮明的對(duì)比。
2．說(shuō)明問(wèn)題：
(1) 圓規(guī)和鉛筆有的特點(diǎn)不同
(2) 如何看待對(duì)方各自的特點(diǎn)
3. 總結(jié)問(wèn)題：升華主題
You are somebody if you can innovative, but if you can't you are nobody.
第一段沒(méi)有描述圖畫(huà)是大忌�？梢詫�(xiě)成：
As is shown in the picture, a pair of compasses are proud of drawing a circle with great ease, while a pencil are burdened with drawing a line. We can figure out something meaningful from the picture.
In our life, some people work very hard. Ang they often feel very tired. Because they often don't have enough experlence. But they often can be have some sudden harvest. So they usually will success, if they do something.
And another people have enough experlence. So they can do something very fast and well. But they usually can't have some harvest on work. S they can't honour all of life.
第二段需要指出問(wèn)題的所在。首先要引用圓規(guī)(compasses) 和pencil 說(shuō)明他們各自的特點(diǎn)和各自看待對(duì)方的態(tài)度。然后再升華到人的角度來(lái)說(shuō)明，做人應(yīng)該怎么怎么樣。可以寫(xiě)成：
To begin with, difference can be seen clearly between the compasses and the pencil due to their different application. The compasses have every reason to feel superior in drawing a circle because they are designed to do so. But if the compasses are used to draw a line, the pencil may have the same feeling. As a result, a conclusion can be easily drawn: both of them have their own advantages.
So don't lose youself in your life.
第三段要總結(jié)問(wèn)題，必須是從圓規(guī)(compasses) 和pencil的問(wèn)題中的抽象出來(lái)，總結(jié)出來(lái)一個(gè)做人做事的普遍規(guī)律。可以寫(xiě)成：
From my point of view, we should be aware of our strengths and weaknesses and never show
due respect to everyone, for no one is perfect in this world.
官方給出的范文：
One possible version:
From the picture I can see a pair of proud compasses and a hard-working pencil. The compasses are big, drawing a circle with ease, while the pencil is small, drawing a line with great effort. I think the compasses are reasonable to be proud because no one else can do the job better. At the same time, however, he should realize the pencil has his own advantages. The pencil can do other shapes better than the compasses, even pictures. So in my opinion, while we are confident in ourselves, we should recognize strengths in others and show due respect for them.
從圖中可以看到一對(duì)驕傲的圓規(guī)和一個(gè)勤勞的鉛筆。圓規(guī)是畫(huà)圓大，輕松，而鉛筆很小，努力地畫(huà)了一條線。我認(rèn)為羅盤(pán)是合理的值得驕傲因?yàn)闆](méi)有其他人可以做的更好。在同一時(shí)間，但是，他應(yīng)該認(rèn)識(shí)到鉛筆都有自己的優(yōu)勢(shì)。鉛筆可以做其他形狀比圓規(guī)，甚至圖片。所以在我看來(lái)，雖然我們對(duì)自己有信心，我們應(yīng)該認(rèn)識(shí)到他人的優(yōu)點(diǎn)，給他們應(yīng)有的尊重。
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