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2016年雅思寫(xiě)作讓步反駁段如何解鎖
取得雅思寫(xiě)作高分，也是眾多考生夢(mèng)寐以求的目標(biāo)。從論證的角度來(lái)看，一篇高分作文要緊扣主旨，立場(chǎng)清晰;論證有力，邏輯性強(qiáng)。我們常用的論證方法有：解釋說(shuō)明法、舉例論證法、比較對(duì)比法、讓步反駁法。其中，能夠大大提高文章的論證力度和邏輯性的就是讓步反駁法。在這里，我結(jié)合yjbys雅思官方范文以及一些真題，與烤鴨們分享一下讓步反駁段的寫(xiě)法。
雅思寫(xiě)作讓步反駁段通常用于論證中的反方段，也就是我們不太支持的那一方觀點(diǎn)。在寫(xiě)反方段時(shí)，首先，我們要進(jìn)行讓步，承認(rèn)反方觀點(diǎn)存在一定的合理性，進(jìn)行解釋說(shuō)明，然后筆鋒一轉(zhuǎn)，進(jìn)行反駁。要記�。鹤尣揭尩某浞�，反駁要反駁的有力。讓我們來(lái)看看一篇?jiǎng)蜓潘脊俜椒段闹械淖尣椒瘩g段。
雅思寫(xiě)作題目：
In many countries students have a break to travel or work for a yearfrom study after they graduate from school. Do the advantages outweigh thedisadvantages?
這篇文章的話題是gap year，在范文的正方段中，考官支持gap year， 認(rèn)為這種做法好處多多，應(yīng)該鼓勵(lì)，然后考官寫(xiě)反方段，也就是gapyear的弊端，這個(gè)段落就是一個(gè)典型的讓步反駁段，具體如下：
However，there are certainly dangers in taking time off at this importantage. Young adults may end up never returning to their school，or finding itdifficult to readapt to an academic environment. They may think that it isbetter to continue in a particular job or to do something completely differentfrom a university course.But overall，I think this is less likely today，whenacademic qualifications are essential for getting a reasonable career.
分析一下，考官首先承認(rèn)gap year有弊端和問(wèn)題，因?yàn)榻?jīng)歷了gapyear之后，有些學(xué)生有可能改變?nèi)松较颍辉富氐綄W(xué)校學(xué)習(xí)了，或者即使回校學(xué)習(xí)，也很難適應(yīng)學(xué)術(shù)環(huán)境。然后，考官筆鋒一轉(zhuǎn)，說(shuō)但是在如今的社會(huì)，上述情況和問(wèn)題不太可能發(fā)生，因?yàn)槿绻胝业胶霉ぷ�、事業(yè)有成，學(xué)歷是至關(guān)重要的。這個(gè)讓步反駁段就寫(xiě)的非常好，使得整篇文章論證更加有力，邏輯性更強(qiáng)，這篇文章無(wú)疑是高分之作。
不少同學(xué)感覺(jué)讓步反駁段比較難寫(xiě)，不知道從什么角度反駁。我在這里總結(jié)了一些行之有效的反駁方法和反駁角度：
1) 當(dāng)我們反駁弊端時(shí)，我們可以說(shuō)弊端和問(wèn)題發(fā)生的可能性小，正如剛才分析的考官范文。此外，我們還可以說(shuō)弊端是可以解決或者可以轉(zhuǎn)化的。
比如這個(gè)題目：Some people believe that time spent on television，video and computergames can be beneficial to children. Others believe that this has negativeeffects on a child. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.這個(gè)題目是關(guān)于兒童看電視打游戲的利弊，假設(shè)我們的反方是看電視打游戲的弊端，那么讓步反駁段可以這么寫(xiě)：不可否認(rèn)，兒童看電視、打游戲存在弊端和問(wèn)題(如影響視力和學(xué)習(xí)、容易上癮)，但是這些問(wèn)題是可以解決的：只要父母幫助兒童提高自控能力，合理分配時(shí)間，他們就可以從這些休閑活動(dòng)中受益。范文如下：
However，spending too much time on TV and games may affect children's studyand health. Deeply attracted by entertaining TV programs and thrilling computergames，children tend to watch TV or play games for hours， neglecting theirhomework or coming exams. Also，too much time spent on TV or games could resultin weakened eyesight and lack of exercises.Nevertheless，with parents' help andinstructions，children can enhance their self-control and time-management，whichmeans they are able to use time in the proper way and benefit from these leisureactivities.
2) 當(dāng)我們寫(xiě)讓步反駁段時(shí)，我們可以說(shuō)反方觀點(diǎn)適用于一些人或情況，但是不適用于另一些人或情況。
比如這個(gè)題目：Many people can now study at home through distance-learning programsvia the Internet or television. Some people say this kind of education cannot becompared to attending a college or university. To what extent do you agree ordisagree?
這個(gè)題目是關(guān)于遠(yuǎn)程教育和傳統(tǒng)教育(上大學(xué))，假設(shè)我們的反方是遠(yuǎn)程教育，那么讓步反駁段可以這么寫(xiě)：當(dāng)然，我們不能否認(rèn)遠(yuǎn)程教育的優(yōu)點(diǎn)和好處(方便省時(shí)、靈活性強(qiáng))，但是這種教育方式不適用于自控力比較差的學(xué)生，他們不能集中注意力學(xué)習(xí)，容易分心，學(xué)習(xí)效果差。范文如下：
On the other hand，we cannot deny the obvious benefits of remote educationwhich provides people with more flexibility and convenience. People could choosetheir favorite courses and decide when and where to study，following their ownpaces. Instead of wasting time on commuting，students could comfortably sit athome and learn a course on line. However，those students who lack self-controland self-discipline cannot learn efficiently in this way，as they might bedistracted by various kinds of things，such as games and videos on line.
希望備考雅思的童鞋們認(rèn)真領(lǐng)會(huì)讓步反駁段的寫(xiě)法，多寫(xiě)多練。這個(gè)論證方法用的好，一定可以大大提高文章整體的論證力度和邏輯性，令考官眼前一亮，助你獲得雅思寫(xiě)作高分!
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