2016雅思寫作思路拓展示例

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　　Some people think that personal happiness is directly related to economic success .Others argue that happiness depends on other factors. Discuss both sides and give your opinion? 有人認為幸福來自經(jīng)濟成功，有人認為幸福來之其他源泉，討論兩種觀點再給出你的意見?(2009年12月12日)

　　相關題目：

　　Some people think that personal happiness is directly related to economic success. Others argue that happiness depends on health. Discuss both of the views and give your own opinion.幸福和經(jīng)濟成功關聯(lián)，幸福來自健康，討論再結論?(2012年10月11日)

　　思路拓展：

　　財富為何是幸福的源泉：

　　1. 財富可以使的人的生活自由，舒適以及幫助人去實現(xiàn)諸多的夢想，例如：環(huán)游世界旅行，接受最好的教育，享受世間美食。

　　2. 財富是社會資源的象征，可以贏得別人的尊敬以及羨慕，可以帶來成就感。

　　幸福的其他源泉：

　　1. 健康是幸福生活的源泉，失去健康，擁有再多的財富，名聲和地位都是沒有任何意義的。生活中很多的例子，企業(yè)家富可敵國，但是，健康每況愈下，身體的負擔帶來心靈的壓力，他們很難幸福。

　　2. 有了健康的保障，人會更加容易事業(yè)成功家庭幸福，因為健康可以使人精力充沛地應對事業(yè)的挑戰(zhàn)以及樂觀地實現(xiàn)家庭的和諧。

　　3. 一個身心健康的人一定是一個樂觀自信的人，他開朗的性格會幫助他擴大交友圈，好友的增加自然帶來生活的樂趣。

　　原創(chuàng)語料庫：

　　1. happiness = sense of happiness n 幸福

　　2. happiness = well-being = pleasure n快樂

　　3. happiness index n幸福指數(shù)

　　4. economic success = economic achievement n經(jīng)濟成就

　　5. have large sums of money = own a great deal of wealth v 擁有財富

　　6. have deep pockets = have money to burn v 財力雄厚

　　7. wholesome physique and mentality n健康的身心

　　8. is closely related to = is associated with 和……相關

　　9. have little correlation to …… v和……不相關聯(lián)

　　10. …… is a more essential factor in achieving happiness ……是獲得幸福更加重要的因素

　　11. strengthen one’s sense of fulfillment v增強人的成就感

　　12. earn respect and admiration from others v贏得別人的尊敬和羨慕

　　13. fulfill one’s many wonderful dreams v實現(xiàn)諸多的美麗夢想

　　14. travel all around the globe v環(huán)球旅行

　　15. enjoy the delicious / delectable/ tasty foods in the world v享受世間美食

　　原創(chuàng)范文賞析：

　　首段：背景介紹 + 爭議焦點 +作家立場

　　People have been pondering for years the connotation of true happiness. Perhaps no issue has led to such an end less debate as to whether or not large sums of money could directly bring people well-being. Standards towards happiness differ widely from person to person. My view is that the sense of well-being could derive from wealth, however, other more significant factors have more indispensable roles to play in enhancing one’s happiness index.

　　二段：論證財富為何是幸福的源泉

　　Indeed, happiness do closely relate to economic achievement to some extent because a great amount of wealth can make people’s life more enjoyable, comfortable and free. To be more specific, one can fulfill his many dreams such as receiving fine education and traveling around the globe if he or she has deep pocket. Still, economic success implies high social status, which can bring people the sense of happiness and even earn respect from others.

　　三段：論證幸福更加重要的源泉

　　Notwithstanding all that, there is no definite correlation between the amount of one’s wealth and his or her happiness index. Happiness，sometimes， does not depend on economic success but completely on wholesome physique and mentality. First, happiness lies in health. More precisely, wealth, fame, or status will be of little meaning if one fails to ensure his health. To illustrate, some affluent enterprisers have money to burn, yet, they are basically unhappy due to the deteriorating health condition and huge mental pressure. Further, health ensures career success and family harmony. In other words, health enables one to brave the career challenges energetically and harmonize the family life optimistically. Ultimately, those who enjoy good health must be confident and optimistic, their pleasant characters can help them enlarge circle of friends. The multiplication of close friends will brighten their spirit and sweeten their lives.

　　尾段：亮明觀點+總結理由

　　In the final analysis, I re-affirm my conviction that happiness is not only related to economic success but also links to health, which is more significant. Only by means of owing desirable health condition can we enjoy the lifelong sense of pleasure although wealth sometimes indicates the source of happiness.

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