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2015年托福滿分作文寫作技巧
無(wú)論是綜合還是獨(dú)立,想拿高分不準(zhǔn)備是不行的。那么,托福寫作中如何寫出近滿分的作文?這就要按照ETS的要求,一步一步將該呈現(xiàn)的內(nèi)容呈現(xiàn)到位了。
第一,概括和組織。
閱讀文章一般結(jié)構(gòu)清晰,觀點(diǎn)明確,學(xué)生往往能一眼看出哪個(gè)是中心句,哪個(gè)是舉例:這種情況很淺顯,學(xué)生只需要挑出中心句,然后稍微換上幾個(gè)同義詞,或是改動(dòng)一下句子結(jié)構(gòu),閱讀的主要觀點(diǎn)便出來(lái)了,而且也不是抄襲閱讀的。另外,在中心句不是很明顯的時(shí)候,學(xué)生則需要分析給的幾句話,或者是從后文的例子與解釋中,去對(duì)應(yīng)觀點(diǎn)句里的關(guān)鍵詞,這樣就能鎖定文章的主要觀點(diǎn)了。
第二,自制模板。
綜合寫作模版好使,但不見(jiàn)得這個(gè)模版是適合你的。有些模版措辭復(fù)雜,句式冗長(zhǎng),而使用了這些模版的人,往往是為了將就模版,限制了自己的發(fā)揮:每每寫的文章,200個(gè)單詞里面,自創(chuàng)的,只有50個(gè)左右。也就是說(shuō),除了模版給出來(lái)的套話,實(shí)際涉及閱讀和聽力觀點(diǎn)和信息的文字,非常的少,內(nèi)容非常單薄,自然分?jǐn)?shù)不會(huì)高過(guò)25。
要用模版的話,就用自己的模版。用自己平時(shí)說(shuō)話的自然方式來(lái)表的,形成了自己的思維方式,用起來(lái)肯定是相當(dāng)自然的。怎么形成自己的模版呢?用至少20道題練手:看自己是習(xí)慣先總結(jié)聽力觀點(diǎn),然后與閱讀觀點(diǎn)一一對(duì)應(yīng)去寫,還是聽力觀點(diǎn)和閱讀觀點(diǎn)分成兩部分去概括,然后再集中論述他們的關(guān)系;有了框架,就到實(shí)質(zhì)了。論述的時(shí)候,一般的學(xué)生都只是一句大話帶過(guò),而沒(méi)有將足夠的證據(jù)或細(xì)節(jié)擺上。
這個(gè)是我們應(yīng)該杜絕的。只有簡(jiǎn)練到位地論述了,才能體現(xiàn)出閱讀和聽力觀點(diǎn)的關(guān)系來(lái)。論述就應(yīng)該:1. 合理使用閱讀和聽力的例子,但不是照抄,而要概括;2. 注意例子和觀點(diǎn)的對(duì)應(yīng),切忌張冠李戴。3. 閱讀聽力缺一不可,要兩條腿走路。
第三,檢查。
文章寫完后,一定要留出至少3分鐘來(lái)檢查。尤其是托福(課程)寫作中的基礎(chǔ)拼寫,時(shí)態(tài),以及單復(fù)數(shù)搭配是否有錯(cuò),及時(shí)更改。
下面為大家?guī)?lái)ETS官方托福作文滿分范文:喜歡的居住環(huán)境,希望對(duì)大家托福備考有所幫助。
托福寫作滿分范文題目:喜歡的居住環(huán)境
Would you prefer to live in a traditional house or in a modern apartment building? Uses pecific reasons and details to support your choice。
托福寫作滿分作文范文:
I know there are advantages to living in a modern apartment, but I’d prefer to live in a traditional house. My main reason is that I love traditional design. It’s graceful and warm and inviting. I think modern design is very empty and sterile and not very inviting. So, because of the way it looks, I’d choose a traditional house.
I recognize the fact that a modern apartment is going to be in much better shape. Being new probably means all the plumbing works, the roof isn’t going to leak, the windows are properly sealed, and the kitchen appliances are in working order. A traditional house can’t guarantee any of that. In fact, it’s likely that things will break down or need replacement, simply because of age. Still, if the appliances are old, so is the wood, and that’s a big advantage as far as I’m concerned.Very few new buildings have the kind of beautiful woods that were used years ago. It’s something that can’t be copied.
Space is always important to me, too. I need a lot of room for my home office, my clothes, and to display all the knickknacks I’ve picked up in my travels. I also like to have interesting space. I don’t want all the rooms and windows the same size or a boxy design. A modern apartment usually comes in one size and shape. A traditional house is going to have a variety of spaces where I can put a little table or a window seat. And it will have lots of room, from basement to attic. These are all good reasons for me to prefer living in a traditional house.
Some people love modern design, but it’s not for me. The space and beauty of a traditional home are more important to me than having everything new and perfect.
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