雅思小作文餅狀圖技巧
在雅思的學(xué)術(shù)類小作文中我們經(jīng)常會(huì)遇到餅狀圖寫作,不要看著一張一張的圖,就退縮了,但是相對(duì)來說,這個(gè)題型還是比較容易寫的一種圖形,不過學(xué)生們也一定不要當(dāng)做這是一件簡(jiǎn)單的事情,想要拿高分還是需要努力的。以下是小編整理的雅思小作文餅狀圖技巧,歡迎閱讀。
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The pie charts show the main reasons for migration to and from the UK in 2007.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words
Sample Answer
The pie charts illustrate the primary reasons that people came to and left the UK in 2007.
At first glance it is clear that the main factor influencing this decision was employment. Having a definite job accounted for 30 per cent of immigration to the UK, and this figure was very similar for emigration, at 29%. A large number of people, 22%, also emigrated because they were looking for a job, though the proportion of people leaving the UK for this purpose was noticeably lower at less than a fifth. Another major factor influencing a move to the UK was for formal study, with over a quarter of people immigrating for this reason. However, interestingly, only a small minority, 4%, left for this.
The proportions of those moving to join a family member were quite similar for immigration and
emigration, at 15% and 13% respectively. Although a significant number of people (32%) gave ‘other’ reasons or did not give a reason why they emigrated, this accounted for only 17% with regards to immigration.
通過上面的這道題以及給出的范文,可以看出餅狀圖的文章是很好模仿的,或者說是有一個(gè)模板的
下面是一些如何組織語句的要點(diǎn):
1、選擇最重要的一個(gè)點(diǎn)放在第一個(gè)寫
從范文中可以看出,換工作,找工作和讀書是作者首先提到的,因?yàn)檫@是選擇搬家的主要原因。被囊括在其他里的是不那么重要的原因或者只是一小部分人群,所以他們可以被放在結(jié)尾再寫
2、讓句子容易被理解
在寫小作文的時(shí)候,應(yīng)該盡可能將信息串在一條邏輯線路上,使文章更容易理解。
在餅狀圖中,最能體現(xiàn)邏輯的就是進(jìn)行對(duì)比,將文章重心放在描述兩張圖的相似點(diǎn)和不同點(diǎn)上,而不是將他們分開描述。
如果分別描述圖表,閱讀的人就需要不斷的`在兩張圖之間切換,自己去發(fā)現(xiàn)兩張圖的不同點(diǎn)在哪里。可以看到在范文里面,作者并沒有這樣做。
3、語言要豐富
在任何小作文中,這點(diǎn)都是很重要的,考生不應(yīng)該不斷的重復(fù)同一種結(jié)構(gòu)。寫餅狀圖時(shí)最重要的句子就是描述比例的那幾句。
通?忌紩(huì)用 "the proportion of..."or "the percentage of..."
但事實(shí)上,還有很多其他的詞組可以用,比如:
A large number of people
over a quarter of people
a small minority
A significant number of people
less than a fifth
思小作文餅狀圖范例1
Task:The pie charts show the proportion of the energy produced from different sources in a country between 1985 and 2003.
參考范文:
The pie charts present the change of the percentage of the energy produced from various sources in a particular country from 1985 to 2003.
It is clear that oil was the most dominant sources from which the energy was produced throughout the whole period, although it dropped from 52% in 1985 to 39%. Likewise, nuclear also declined, but much less significantly to 17%, becoming the third primary source from which the energy was produced.
The percentage of natural gas, on the other hand, witnessed the most noticeable increase during the period, rising from 13% in 1985 to 23% in 2003. Coal and other renewable resources, though whose increase was less marked, rising by 5% and 3% respectively.
Interestingly, the proportion of the energy produced from the hydrogen remained stable in 1985 and 2003, making it the least used sources from which the energy was produced.
Overall, oil, natural gas and nuclear still constitute a larger proportion of all the sources, while other three sources, namely coal, hydrogen and other renewable, are less used when producing the energy.
雅思小作文餅狀圖范例2
The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the
1990 s.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Sample Answer:
The given information shows the main reasons of lands get less productive and also shows the effect of land losing its productivity in three different regions of the world during 1990 s.
As is presented in the graphs, over-grazing & deforestation are two main reasons for lands becoming less productive and these two reasons contribute to 65% of this short of less productivity of lands. Another important reason for lands are getting less productive is over cultivation which is 28% reason for this effect. All other reasons cause 7% of this decreased productivity of land.
The reasons for which the lands degraded vary region to region and according to the table data, European lands are getting less productive by 23% in 1990 s because of deforestation, over-cultivation and over-grazing. Deforestation was the major reason why the European lands got less productive and it was 9.8% while two other reasons were around 5% to 7%. In Oceana region which comprised a large portion of South Pacific Islands, Australia and New Zealand had 13% decrease of land’s procuring capability and over-cultivation was not the reason there. Finally North American countries were less affected (only 5%) for those man created reasons of land’s decrease in productivity.
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