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英語(yǔ)十句作文法寫(xiě)作技巧
引導(dǎo)語(yǔ)：十句作文法是由有關(guān)專家總結(jié)出來(lái)的一種高分作文方法，考生在經(jīng)過(guò)短期訓(xùn)練之后便可較大幅度地提高成績(jī)。以下是百分網(wǎng)小編分享給大家的英語(yǔ)十句作文法寫(xiě)作技巧，歡迎閱讀!
需要指出的是所謂十句作文并非一定10句，從很多考生的高分(200詞以下)來(lái)分析，句子數(shù)量在8句至12句(依句子長(zhǎng)短和結(jié)構(gòu)不同而不同)。如以每個(gè)句子平均10—15個(gè)單詞計(jì)算，便能用8—12個(gè)句子完成一篇要求120—150字的作文。
其基本模式為：
┌─主題句 句 1
第一段─┤
開(kāi)頭 └─擴(kuò)展句 句 2
┌─主題句 句 1
第一段─┤
正文 ├─擴(kuò)展句 句 2
├─擴(kuò)展句 句 3
├─擴(kuò)展句 句 4
├─擴(kuò)展句 句 5
├─擴(kuò)展句 句 6
├─擴(kuò)展句 句 7
├─擴(kuò)展句 句 8
└─擴(kuò)展句 句 9
第三段 ──結(jié)尾句 句10
結(jié)尾
第一段為開(kāi)頭，包括兩句。第一句為主題句，必須提出，通過(guò)問(wèn)題點(diǎn)明全文主題;第二句為擴(kuò)展句，須進(jìn)一步說(shuō)明和支持主題句�；蚴菍㈥P(guān)系倒過(guò)來(lái)，由第一句說(shuō)明情況，第二句提出問(wèn)題。
第二段為正文，共七句。第一句(句3)為主題句，提出本段的主題，它應(yīng)與第一段的主題相關(guān)和一致。第二句至第七句(句4一句7)為擴(kuò)展句，說(shuō)明和支持本段的主題。句與句之間要注意運(yùn)用好過(guò)渡使段落邏輯合理，結(jié)構(gòu)得當(dāng)。
第三段為結(jié)尾，簡(jiǎn)化為一句，也是全文的總結(jié)句，它將前面內(nèi)容總結(jié)為一結(jié)果，表明自己的論點(diǎn)。
三段之間的連接要靈活運(yùn)用“啟、承、轉(zhuǎn)、合”的連接過(guò)渡手段。例如：
Example 1
Television
Television presents a vivid world in front of us. (1)(主題句)Through TV, wecan learn what is happening half way across the world. (2)(擴(kuò)展句)Television also plays an important educational role in our daily life. (3)(主題句) For one thing, the TV university provides an opportunity for many young men who can not go to formal universities. (4)(擴(kuò)展句) For another, children can broaden their scope of knowledge by watching such popular programs as "The Animal World", and "The Mickey Mouse and Duck Donald". (5)(擴(kuò)展句) Besides, women can learn about the latest fashion of dresses and the best recipe for making fruit cakes. (6)(擴(kuò)展句) Furthermore, we learn many world advanced technologies from TV programs such as computer and telecommunication. (7)(擴(kuò)展句) And also we can learn singing, dancing and doing physical exercises in some special TV training courses.(8)(擴(kuò)展句) In short, the effect of TV's educational role is becoming more and more obvious. (9)(擴(kuò)展句)
Having viewed these several aspects, and with many more TV program produced, I believe that our life will become even more significant. (10)(總結(jié)句) (全文共165個(gè)詞)
專家點(diǎn)評(píng)：本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)介全，上下銜接自然，論據(jù)充分，運(yùn)用了一些較高級(jí)的詞匯和語(yǔ)句，是一篇欣賞價(jià)值較大的優(yōu)秀范文。
1.本文是一篇典型的十句作文，主題句“Television presents a vivid world in front of us”點(diǎn)明了文章的主題，其他句子均圍繞它進(jìn)行擴(kuò)展。擴(kuò)展句(句2—9)內(nèi)容詳實(shí)，結(jié)束句(句10)總結(jié)性和概括性很強(qiáng)。整篇文章層次清晰，充分體現(xiàn)了十句作文法的特點(diǎn)。
2.較好地使用了大量的連接詞，如for one thing, for another, besides, furthermore, and also等，另外，in short的使用也使結(jié)論更加清晰，概括更加明了。
3.最后的總結(jié)句富有創(chuàng)意，利用分詞短語(yǔ)的形式把上下文連貫起來(lái)，體現(xiàn)了作者對(duì)英文句式的靈活應(yīng)用，避免了一般性的概括語(yǔ)，很有特點(diǎn)。
4.使用了較高級(jí)的詞匯句型，不單調(diào)，像賓語(yǔ)從句(what is happening halfway across the world, our life will become more significant),賓語(yǔ)從句(who can not go to formal university),分詞短語(yǔ)(by watching…，for making fruit cakes, having viewed these aspects)，重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)(plays an important educational role, provide…for…)，高級(jí)單詞(present, broaden, scope)和with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)(with many more TV programs produced)等，這些都極大地提升了文章的檔次。
使用十句作文法，首先要仔細(xì)審題，確定文章的中心問(wèn)題。主題句的表達(dá)特別重要，然后才能圍繞中心進(jìn)行擴(kuò)展，使意圖明確。擴(kuò)展句一定要具體詳細(xì)，不可太空、太泛，不要對(duì)與要求無(wú)關(guān)的內(nèi)容進(jìn)行隨意發(fā)揮，更不可為了表現(xiàn)英語(yǔ)水平而寫(xiě)出文不對(duì)題的句子，畫(huà)蛇添足。
Example 2
Changes in People's Diet
There have been some changes nowadays in the diet of the Chinese. (1)(主題句) For example, grain, the main food of most people in China, is now playing a less important role, while the consumption of high-nutrition food such as milk, meat has increased. (2) (擴(kuò)展句)The changes in diet can be accounted for by a number of factors. (3) (主題句)
First,people are much wealthier than before. (4) (擴(kuò)展句) With a higher income,they can afford to buy good foods which, in the past, were rarely seen on the dinner tables of ordinary families. (5) (擴(kuò)展句) Another factor is that people have realized the importance of a balanced diet to their health. (6) (擴(kuò)展句) Lack of certain amount of meat or milk, for example, will result in poor health. (7) (擴(kuò)展句) Finally, owing to the economic reform, meat and milk,which were scarce in the past, are produced in large quantities. (8) (擴(kuò)展句) For all those reasons, what was formerly called "the basket of vegetables" has become that of varied foods. (9) (擴(kuò)展句)
To sum up, insignificant as those changes may seem, they are the signs of the improved economic condition in China, and we believe that as the effort in the modernization movement continues, there will be greater changes in people's diet in the future. (10) (總結(jié)句) (全文共195個(gè)詞)
謀篇布局
1.審題確定格式、體裁、時(shí)態(tài)、人稱等寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)。
2.列出提綱，確定開(kāi)頭句、擴(kuò)展句和總結(jié)句，選擇好適宜的句型。
3、利用一些關(guān)聯(lián)詞或者過(guò)渡句把句子有機(jī)地連接起來(lái)，必要時(shí)可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)。
4、仔細(xì)檢查，適當(dāng)修改，保證句子結(jié)構(gòu)完整，要點(diǎn)齊全，人稱時(shí)態(tài)主謂一致。
5.認(rèn)真謄寫(xiě)，卷面整潔。
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