雅思作文漂亮收尾的寫(xiě)法
不像國(guó)內(nèi)大學(xué)的英語(yǔ)四六級(jí),雅思是英國(guó)留學(xué)通用的考試,其難度更大,雅思寫(xiě)作也一直是很多考試頭疼的地方。如何寫(xiě)好雅思作文的結(jié)尾,無(wú)疑關(guān)系到寫(xiě)作的整體分?jǐn)?shù)。下面小編向大家推薦幾個(gè)辦法,希望對(duì)你有幫助。
請(qǐng)看雅思例題及相關(guān)結(jié)尾:
V104 Wild animals have no place in the 21st century. Some people think that preventing these wild animals from dying out is a waste of resource. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
雅思考試結(jié)尾1:
Someone said safeguard of wild animals is a waste of resource, but I do not agree. It seems we would spend some time, wealth and manpower on this meaningless thing. Actually we also do this for human being ourselves. lets protect wild animals right now.
評(píng):結(jié)尾第一句話,是對(duì)于考官給出的觀點(diǎn)的轉(zhuǎn)述,要直接放在開(kāi)篇。結(jié)尾應(yīng)對(duì)全文觀點(diǎn)的總結(jié)。雅思大作文的結(jié)尾一定要有說(shuō)服力,seems讓文章顯得說(shuō)服力不足,meaningless跟全文觀點(diǎn)相孛。最后一句有喊口號(hào)的意味,不符合英語(yǔ)議論文的習(xí)慣,同樣的意思可改換客觀平實(shí)的文風(fēng)收尾。
雅思結(jié)尾2:
To sum up, we can not live without wild animals due to their profound effects on us. For this reason, we should try our best to protect them. Lets remember one thing---- protecting wild animals is equivalent to protecting ourselves.
評(píng):雙重否定表示強(qiáng)調(diào),是英語(yǔ)議論文的常見(jiàn)手法,令結(jié)尾收的`堅(jiān)定有力。Profound effects深遠(yuǎn)影響很好地呼應(yīng)了文中提到過(guò)的野生動(dòng)物保護(hù)的意義,令文章渾然一體。作者的觀點(diǎn)跟結(jié)尾1作者觀點(diǎn)完全一樣,但采用了平實(shí)的陳述口氣,并用了書(shū)面的地道詞匯,equivalent to ,是一個(gè)很不錯(cuò)的結(jié)尾。
雅思考試結(jié)尾3:
Certainly, our diet cannot be without meat. There are living stocks, which can provide us with sufficient and nutritious produce. Therefore, we need not to resort to wild animals, especially the endangered ones. To protect animals is to protect our living environment. Every individual should join efforts to keep the diversity of animals.
評(píng):作者不僅會(huì)用否定句表達(dá)強(qiáng)調(diào),還很及時(shí)地采用了讓步式的收尾,指出,人當(dāng)然要吃肉,但有眾多家畜,不必殺戮野生動(dòng)物,尤其是瀕危的物種。讓步式結(jié)尾讓文章顯的客觀公正,符合英語(yǔ)議論文的要求和習(xí)慣,總體很有說(shuō)服力。再加上語(yǔ)言上同樣成功,地道的措辭,如,living stocks, sufficient and nutritious, resort to (訴諸于),endangered ones, join efforts, diversity 是一篇8分作文的經(jīng)典結(jié)尾。
以上就是如何讓你的雅思寫(xiě)作結(jié)尾更閃亮的內(nèi)容,通過(guò)三個(gè)例子,我們應(yīng)該知道文章的結(jié)尾要怎么寫(xiě)了,詞匯當(dāng)然是不能或缺了,當(dāng)然再加個(gè)長(zhǎng)難句,我想就可以了!大家也可以抽時(shí)間好好練習(xí)寫(xiě)結(jié)尾,自己想話題然后只寫(xiě)結(jié)尾試一下,然后找老師給批改下,希望大家能夠在雅思寫(xiě)作考試中拿下高分!
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